Nice!
Just some honest critisism if that is what you are looking for.
But the melody change was sudden and to my ears just made me think if it really fit in that location.
The melody continues for the entire song and even though it was modified just did not do it for me.
But taking the song into parts it sounded great!
You are missing bass in areas that i would of included, such as near the end.
aswell the drums were all over the place and so i was not able to get into the groove of it.
overall 7/10 4/5
you really have something here that can be made into something great! i would continue to work on this song if i was you as each individual part sounds amazing!